Monday 8 June 2015

Gone...

Today we did a quick write and i wrote about a toy horse! This is my story:

The dark hallway lit up in exploding light, leaving a small wooden horse toy. The horse started to move, galloping down the creaking hallway. The toy was old. Wood was rotting away at the bottom of the stick. The dark hallway became a playground. Kids from next door came tapping on the windows, to see what the commotion was. They started to play. The horse led them all around the hallway, the kids were following. It turned into a game of Follow the Leader. Suddenly, the lights went out, the kids sprinted out of the old house, screaming. Then the lights came on again, the horse toy was gone…

By: Laura mather

2 comments:

  1. Hi Laura my name is Aurora from St. pius X catholic school and I would just like to say that was a very artistic, creepy story but anyway keep up the good work Laura

    - Auroraxx

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  2. Hi Laura my name is Aurora from St. pius X catholic school and I would just like to say that was a very artistic, creepy story but anyway keep up the good work Laura

    - Auroraxx

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